一、出示修改范例 ,供学生模仿和借鉴。学生初学修改作文 ,必须有个模仿学习的过程 ,在明确了修改目标后 ,我把学生的作文抄在幻灯片上 ,借助幻灯投影 ,学习用规范的修改符号 ,删、添、改、调、换 ,进行修改示范 ,让学生清楚地看到整个修改过程 ,看懂每个修改符号的意思 ,使他 First, to produce examples of changes for students to imitate and learn from. Students begin to modify essay, there must be a process of imitation to learn, in a clear goal of the amendment, I copied the students' composition on the slide, with the help of slide projector, learning to use the standard modification symbols, delete, add, change, transfer, change , To modify the model so that students can clearly see the entire modification process, understand the meaning of each modified symbol so that he