同学们,还记得苏教版《语文》四年级上册习作七的看图习作吗?这是两位小作者的习作片段:1.当我睁开眼睛时,一只家燕已经孤独地躺在冰凉的马路上了。一只家燕从树上飞下来,看着死去的家燕。它扑扑翅膀,拍打死去的家燕,可是家燕却一动也不动。最后,这只家燕只好飞走了。2.当我睁开眼睛时,一只家燕已经孤独地躺在冰凉的马路上了。这时,一只家燕从树上飞下来,看样子像是它的妈妈。燕妈妈呆呆地凝视着它奄 Students, still remember the Sujiao version of the “Chinese” fourth grade on the books for the practice of drawing seven? This is the two little authors of the clip: 1. When I opened my eyes, a barn owl has been lying alone in the cold On the road A housefly flew down from the tree, watching the dead Yan. It flapping its wings, swatted dead swallow, but Yan did not move. Finally, this swallow had to fly away. 2. When I opened my eyes, a swallow had been lonely on the cold road. At this time, a housefly flew down from the tree, looks like it’s mom. Yan mother stared blankly at it