作文是高考试题中分值最重的一题,但是写了这么多年,学生作文还是存在诸多问题。甚至,记叙文这种“入门”文体也把握不好,或多或少地存在着一些弊病:其一,作文不能体现真情实感,多是些矫揉造作、无病呻吟的情感抒发,更有甚者是故事情节虚假乱造,全篇假话、空话。其二,内容空洞,题材贫乏,很少有新颖的让阅卷老师眼前一亮的富有灵性的作品。其三,在人物的刻画上死板僵硬,没有对人物进行细致、生动的刻画。多是些贫乏无味的语言描写,除此之外,再无其他。 Composition is the highest score of the college entrance examination test questions, but wrote so many years, there are still many problems in student essay. Even narrative “” entry "style is also not good grasp, more or less there are some disadvantages: First, the composition can not reflect the true feelings, mostly artificial, disease-free moaning emotions to express, what is more is False story of the story, the whole story, empty talk. Second, the contents of the hole, the subject matter is poor, there are few novel scrolls so vivid spiritual works. Third, rigid rigid characterization of the characters, there is no detailed characterization, vivid portrayal. There is nothing more than a poorly tasteless language description.