长篇历史小说《安史之乱》(黄沙尘著,长江文艺出版社2003年8月出版),是我所读过的第一部专门以安史之乱为题材的小说,写得相当好。遗憾的是,作者在语言上锤炼不够,出版时校对又不细致,因此书中存在着不少文字上的毛病。现在摘录其中部分例子,归纳成九方面问题,供作者今后修订时参考。 A long historical novel “An Shi's chaos” (Yellow sand and dust, the Yangtze River Art Publishing House published in August 2003), I read the first book devoted to Anshun chaos as the theme of the novel, written quite well. Unfortunately, the author did not do enough training in the language and did not elaborate on proofreading at the time of publication, so there were many typographical errors in the book. Now excerpt some of the examples, summarized into nine areas for future reference for the author.