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很多同学作文时不注意人称的使用,作文常出现人称错位、人称不统一的毛病。如下面的几个作文片断就出现了这个问题。例1.随着一阵热烈的掌声,我跨着矫健的步伐走上主席台,面对着老校长,我脸上充满了激动的表情,当老校长双手递给我“三好学生”奖状时,我不由得心头一热,晶莹的泪珠滚出了我眼眶……例2.清晨,赵强倚在门框上,远远望见林霞老师进入了小巷口,手中还捧着一盆兰花,有几朵正含苞待放,有一朵已绽开了花
Many students do not pay attention to the use of personal writing, composition often appear dislocation of people, people say the problem is not uniform. A few pieces of the following composition appeared on the issue. Example 1. With a warm applause, I stepped onto the podium across the vigorous pace. In the face of the old principal, my face was full of excitement. When the old principal handed me the certificate of “Miyoshi students” When I could not help but get a hot heart, crystal tears dripping out of my eyes ... Example 2 early morning, Zhao Qiang leaning on the door frame, far from seeing Lin Xia teacher entered the alley, holding a pot of orchids in his hand, There are a few buds are budding, one has blooming flowers