在语文教学中,写作是展示和培养学生个性的重要平台,而习作点评则是提高学生写作能力的激活点。作为语文教师,我们应该在点评中准确把握方向,善于发现学生习作中的个性,并在点评中给予肯定和赏识,让学生在阳光点评中拥有可贵的写作自信心和积极性,发挥自己的聪明才智。一、用爱心相伴语文习作中的自我评价使学生参与到语文作文的评价中来,把评价的视角转移到关注习作的 In Chinese teaching, writing is an important platform for displaying and cultivating students ’individuality, while writing reviews is an active point to improve students’ writing ability. As a language teacher, we should accurately grasp the direction in the comments, be good at discovering the individuality in the students’ assignments, and affirm and appreciate them in the reviews so that students have valuable writing self-confidence and enthusiasm in the sunshine reviews and exert their own talents . First, with self-evaluation of Chinese companion in companion of love to enable students to participate in the evaluation of Chinese essay, the evaluation of the perspective transferred to pay attention to the work