《语文学习》1992年第5期第27页写道:“写作教学的最大失败,是把心灵沟通,情感渲泄的快乐,变成言不由衷、动辄得咎的痛苦。” 《语文教学通讯》1992年第1期第30页写道:“把‘那就是一只蟋蟀’放在每段的段首,反复咏叹,让那悠悠的乡思和绵绵的乡情,得以充分的渲泄。” “Language learning”, No. 5, 1992, p. 27, wrote: “The greatest failure in writing teaching is to turn the happiness of spiritual communication and emotional venting into the pain of insincerity and impatience.” Language Teaching Communication, 1992 On the 30th page of the issue, he wrote, “putting ’that is a pipa’ at the beginning of each paragraph, repeatedly sighing and letting the long-lived homesickness and nostalgia of the nostalgia be fully vented.”