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一、紧扣题干规定的“中心”(或“重点”),切忌“中心”转移,文不对题。要做到这一点,必须以题干规定的“中心”为陈述对象,或干脆以“中心”词语作主语造句。 [试题](2002年·北京)以下面给出的文字为开头,以“路”为中心,分别写一段话,每段不少于50个字。 北京的路平直而宽阔。 人生的路漫长而多彩。 下面以对情景一的扩写为例来作点分析。 [扩展错例]北京是中华人民共和国的首都,北京的发展便象征着中国的发展,北京的路平直而宽阔,四通八达,拥有非常便利的交通。 [简析]以上答案不仅没有以“北京的路平直而宽阔”为开头,更重要的是没有围绕“中心”写。答案共五
One, close to the provisions of the “center” (or “focus”), avoid “center ” transfer, the text is not correct. To do this, you must use the “center” specified in the question as the object of the statement, or simply use the word “center” as the subject of the sentence. [Examination] (2002 Beijing) Start with the text given below, centered on “Road” and write a paragraph of at least 50 words each. The road to Beijing is straight and wide. The road to life is long and colorful. The following is an analysis of scenario 1 expansion. [Extended Errors] Beijing is the capital of the People’s Republic of China. The development of Beijing symbolizes the development of China. Beijing’s road is straight and wide, extending in all directions and has very convenient transportation. [Analysis] The above answer not only does not begin with “Beijing’s straight and wide ”, but more importantly, does not write around “center”. There are five answers