一直以来,传统“先写后改”的习作教学模式存在着“厚写薄改”的误区,且在“先写”的过程中,教师的介入指令干扰过多,学生基本是被“牵着鼻子”写,导致其习作灵性缺失,甚至演变成怕写。为了突破这一常规性思维,我们提出“先无拘无束写,再有章有法改”的理念,落脚点倾向在“改”上。核心思路是“厚积薄发—放手先写—改中得法”。目的是实 All along, the traditional teaching mode of “writing first and then changing” has the misunderstanding of “thick writing and thin writing”, and in the process of “writing first”, teachers’ intervening instructions interfere too much. Students Basically be “lead nose ” to write, resulting in lack of spirituality of their writing, and even evolved into fear of writing. In order to break through this conventional thinking, we put forward the idea of ​​“writing freely and then reforming the laws and regulations,” and we tend to focus on “changing”. The core idea is “generous - let go first write - change the law ”. The purpose is real