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一、鼓励修改的积极性俗话说,“文章不厌百回改”,文章不是写好的,而是改好的.每逢教鲁迅先生《为了忘却的记念》一文时,教师总不忘举文中那首七律诗词语改动的例子.诗里有这样两句:“忍看朋辈成新鬼,怒向刀丛觅小诗.”1932年7月11日鲁迅日记上写的是“眼看朋辈成新鬼.怒向刀边觅小诗”.而1933年作者写《为了忘记的记念》一文引用这首诗时,把“眼看”改为“忍看”.“刀边”改为“刀丛”.两字之差,表现出鲁迅先生对革命青年被虐杀的无限痛惜,对嗜血成性的刽子
I. Encourage the enthusiasm of amendments As the saying goes, “The article has not changed its ranks.” The article is not well written, but it is a good one. Whenever he taught Lu Xun’s article “In Memory of Forgetting,” the teacher always remembered the article. The example of the first seven words of poetry changes. There are two sentences in the poem: “Reach your peers to become new ghosts and anger towards the knife bundles and poems.” On July 11th, 1932, Lu Xun’s diary wrote “seeing peers The new ghost. Fury to the side of the knife.“ In 1933, when the author wrote ”Remembering Forgotten“, when he quoted this poem, he changed ”seeing“ to ”bears to see“. ”Knife edge“ was changed to ”knife plexus". The difference between the two words shows that Mr. Lu Xun deplores the indefinite slaughter of revolutionary youth and the bloodthirsty blindness.