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最近,翻看了小学语文第九册,发现有三个句子值得商榷。第7课《黄河象》中有这样一个句子:“老象跑在前头,最先来到了河边。它伸长了鼻子去吸河水。可是河水很浅,它够不着,只好又往前走了一步。它想,要是跨进水里,美美地饱喝一顿,再洗个澡,那才凉爽呢!”(着重号是笔者加的,下同)要是你把这个句子多念几遍,就会感到不流畅。原因何在呢?这个句子是个复句,“要是”和“那才”错误地用在这个复句里,使这个复句的分句间的逻辑
Recently, I flipped through the ninth language of primary school and found three sentences worth discussing. In Lesson 7, “The Yellow River,” there is a sentence like this: “The elephant ran to the front, first to the river, and stretched her nose to suck in the water, but the river was so shallow that she could not reach it, A step.It would like to, if cross into the water, the United States and the United States to take a meal, take a bath, then it cool! ”(Emphasis number is the author plus, the same below) If you read this sentence more often, Will feel not smooth. The reason why? This sentence is a complex sentence, “if” and “that” is wrongly used in this complex sentence, so that the complex sentence logic between the clauses