家长群。一个朋友要大家改病句:“每个有理想的少年儿童,都希望自己将来成为一个高素质的建设人才。”大家兴致勃勃地发表见解。家长1:“去掉中间的逗号。”家长2:“去掉‘儿童’,只留‘少年’。”家长3:“‘每个’和‘都’不能对应‘一个’,矛盾。”……“答案?”“老师你说说看。”“老师你公布标准答案吧。”我看了一下,觉得有些晕。再一细看,更晕。这到底是啥题呢?说不行,好像也行,说行吧,总觉得有些别扭。我竟没看出门道来。 Parents group. A friend wants everyone to change the sentence: “Every ideal young child wants to become a high-quality construction talent in the future.” Parents 1: “Remove the comma in the middle.” “Parents 2: ” Remove ’children’, leaving only ’juveniles’. “Parents 3: ” Each “and ” Do “correspond to ”“ ”“ Teacher you talk about. ”“ Teacher you released the standard answer. ”I looked a bit, feel a bit dizzy. Look carefully, more dizzy. This is exactly what problem? No, it seems OK, that right, always feel awkward. I actually did not see the doorway.