一、几种开头常见病我在学生的习作中,看见过不少五花八门的开头,既不自然又不实在,不但离题,而且空洞无物,“潇潇洒洒”、自我得意地写得很长,占了很大的篇幅,削弱了习作中所写的人物、事件和景物的重点。这样的开头出现在刚学习写作的小学生习作中,要及早引导他们分析、救治 First, a few common diseases at the beginning I am in the student’s work, I have seen many varied beginnings, both natural and not real, not only to leave the subject, and nothing, “Xiaoxunasairu” self-satisfied to write a very long, accounting for A lot of space, weakening the writing of the characters, events and scenery focus. Such a beginning appeared in the study of pupils just learning writing, we must guide them as early as possible analysis, treatment