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新课程对小学生作文的要求之一是“有具体内容”。由此可见,把文章写具体是对小学生作文的基本要求。可是有很大一部分小学教师只重视让学生把文章写具体,而忽略了把文章写简洁。因而学生作文时片面追求字数,文章拖泥带水,重复啰嗦。请看一位小学生写的一段文字:我姓杨名鑫,我是一名小学生,我今年已经12岁了。现在我在田家炳小学读书,读的是四年级。我的班主任老师叫吴燕,高高的个子,一头乌黑的头发……
One of the requirements of the new curriculum for pupils writing is “have specific content ”. Thus, the article written specifically for the basic requirements of pupils writing. However, a large part of primary school teachers only pay attention to letting students write articles specifically, while ignoring the article to write concise. Thus one-sided pursuit of words when students writing, article sloppy, repeat long-winded. Please see a section of primary school students to write a text: My name is Yang Mingxin, I am a primary school student, I am 12 years old this year. Now I am studying at Tian Jia Bing Primary School, reading the fourth grade. My class teacher named Wu Yan, tall, dark hair ... ...