作文评语是作文教学中至关重要的一环,它是教师对学生习作的直接评价,是师生双向交流的文字形式。教师饱含人文关怀色彩的评语,往往更能唤起学生的写作兴趣,点燃学生的写作热情,激活学生的创造思维,培养学生正确的人生观、价值观和高尚的人格。那么,如何在作文评语中渗透对学生的人文关怀呢?笔者认为可以从以下几方面着手:一、多一点情感——激发写作的热情孩子的情感从内心流入作文,又从作 Essay writing is a crucial part of composition teaching. It is a direct evaluation of teachers’ writing practice and a two-way communication between teachers and students. Teachers’ comments on the color of humane care often arouse students’ interest in writing, arouse students’ enthusiasm in writing, activate students’ creative thinking and cultivate students’ correct outlook on life, values ​​and noble personality. So, how to infiltrate the humane care of students in composition reviews? The author thinks that we can start from the following aspects: One, a little more emotion - the enthusiasm of writing inspire children’s emotions into the composition from the heart, and from