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结构是文章的组织安排问题,古人称之为“谋篇”“布局”。它根据表现主题的需要,把材料有步骤、有主次地组织起来,使之成为一个紧密、有机、统一的整体,让文章前后连贯、浑然一体。然而,许多同学作文时懒得考虑文章的结构,往往拿笔就写,结果写到后面才发现有的地方考虑不周,导致作文结构混乱。下面是以“风”为话题的作文片段。顶风而行,就得有高尚的品质。李白困窘,不肯“摧眉折腰”;子路家穷,只是背米养亲;张作霖手黑,可也为东三省而死……这些人凭着一颗正义之心,凭着高尚的人格,凭着“亦余心之所善兮,虽九死其犹未悔”的精神,顶住了世俗之风,霸权之势。
The structure is the organization and arrangement of the article. The ancients called it “discovery” and “layout.” Based on the needs of the theme of expression, it organizes the materials step by step, first and foremost, making it a close, organic, and unified whole, so that the article is consistent before and after the integration. However, many students do not bother to think about the structure of the article when they are writing. They often write with their pens. When the results are written, they find that some places are ill-conceived, leading to confusion in the composition of the composition. The following is a fragment of the composition with the theme of “wind”. If you walk in the wind, you must have high quality. Li Bai is embarrassed and refuses to “destroy his eyebrows and lean back”; the poor family is poor, but he only cares for his parents; Zhang Zuolin’s hands are black and he can also die for the three provinces in the east... These people have a noble heart with a sense of justice. Personality, with the spirit of “I have more than one heart, and even though he has not yet repented,” resisted the trend of worldliness and hegemony.